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BFF

You are the yellow spring sun
on fresh yellow-green grass,
virgin grass that is studded
with white and blue flowers
and has not been mowed
ever.

You are the smell of
good dirt (but all dirt
is good dirt) freshly turned and
drying in the lazy sun.

You are sun-ripened tomatoes
straight from the vine
warm and firm
loaded with salt and pepper
with a good tall glass of tea
so sweet it could put you in
a coma.

You are the porch swing covered in
pine pollen and
tree sex
that creaks a familiar
squeaky protest
against my weight.

You are inch worms
bright green and brown
dangling from the trees,
suspended on
gossamer threads and
measuring the length
of my arm.

You are the first warm rain
of the spring time
that freshens the earth and
ushers in the brand new
barefoot season.

You are a chilled melon
on a scorchingly hot day
with sugar and spice but
really just salt that puckers my
tongue while the cold juices
run down.

You are the moon shine on
new leaves in my
back yard while the
crickets sing all night
long.

You are everything we almost
and nothing we never and
all the stuff in between.
©2008-2009 ~tricksyriver
:icontricksyriver:

Author's Comments

Written for Tots and Teens: A Lit. Contest

It reminds me of the poems I wrote in junior high and high school. And it's my favorite type of poem to write.

Inspired by best friends and everything I love.

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:iconravenclawxwhitewolf:
I love the imagery in this poem, the way the words flow from one thing to the next. It's beautiful. Congrats on winning the contest, by the way. :) :+favlove:

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"Stories are the only real magic that humans have left."
- Emmy Cicierega
:iconrockerlane1110:
The language in this is beautiful. The images are so sweet and so vivid it could definitely hold a child's attention. Congrats on the win!

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"My skin is singed but it heals my heart and with glowing pride I'll wear my scars."
~AFI "Malleus Maleficarum"
:icontricksyriver:
Thank you! :D

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I like my soul on text. I love your soul on toast.
:icontricksyriver:
Thank you! :heart:

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I like my soul on text. I love your soul on toast.
:iconmsklystron:
Congratulations!!!

This really is a delightful poem. The language and imagery reflect the sensuality of youth perfectly.

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Stop popping that bubble wrap and check out *ThePurpleNurple
“Make [your] characters want something right away—even if it’s only a glass of water."-- Kurt Vonnegut Jr.
:icontricksyriver:
Thank you! I'm glad you think so. :heart:

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I like my soul on text. I love your soul on toast.
:iconmajor-sztos:
moving

tell me, where did the title came from or what does it mean? cause that's the bit i can decipher
:icontricksyriver:
It's shorthand for "best friends forever," the stuff I used to scribble in notes and yearbooks back in the day. Best friends are an inspiration.

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I like my soul on text. I love your soul on toast.
:iconcritical-condition:
It's such an inspiration!!
Well done on a beautiful piece of work : )

--
be yourself
everyone else is already taken.

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